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英语四级作文分类 比较对照预测范文及点评 07:大学生参与社会实践的利弊

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大学英语四级考试作文,比较对照型作文预测范文及点评话题7,大学生参与社会实践的利弊。

Topic 7 Social Practice
1.越来越多的大学生参与社会实践
2.社会实践对大学生学习和生活的好处
3.参加社会实践应该注意的问题

Social Practice

In recent years,more and more college students(house to take part in social practice.  According to a recent survey conducted by China Education Ministry,the past 5 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the proportion of college students taking social practice from 23. 5 percent to 78. 6 percent.

Social practice will bring great benefits to college students on both their study and daily life.  On the one, hand,their close contact with working people might help them improve the sense of applying knowledge to practical problem. On the other hand,by taking social practice,college students will further realize what their shortcomings are and therefore have a better understanding of the specific aim of their study.

Students should learn to strike a balance between social practice and their own study.  Social practice should never he as an excuse of their not studying hard.(147词)

“一句话”点评

毫无疑问,第一段的China Education Ministry和数据将首先吸引阅卷老师的眼球,同时使用了witness, sharp等好词和taking分词做后置定语,将形成良好的第一印象。

快捷构思

第一段:描述现象,引人该段中心“越来越多的大学生参与社会实践”,而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示,举出例子更加形象地说明参加社会实践的大学生的比例越来越多。

第二段:以模板句提出该段中心“社会实践对大学生学习和生活的好处”,接着用improve the sense of applying knowledge to practical problem和realize what their shortcomings are and therefore have a better understanding of the specific aim of their study来支持。

第三段:直接展现段落中心“参加社会实践应该要注意的问题”,并提出简要的一个原因,不做更深层次的展开。

美丽词句

(1) bring great benefits带来很大的益处

(2)improve the sense of applying knowledge to practical problem提高运用知识解决实际问题的意识

(3) a better understanding of the specific aim of their study很好地理解学习中的特定目标

(4) strike a balance between... and二在……和……之间保持平衡(strike优于keep)

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